The drinking sequence is great. The inclusion of the toilet is very funny but may be better placed at the end. It adds a punchline that can be read 2 ways- I'm so thirsty I'll drink anything -or- I've had too much to drink.
The study sequence is more engaging than the PB&J. The lead up to the study shot would have more impact if the clock read 7:50. It follows the rule that you set up in the previous 2 clock shots.
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very interesting photos and its neat you took the time to do two sequences.
The drinking sequence is great. The inclusion of the toilet is very funny but may be better placed at the end. It adds a punchline that can be read 2 ways- I'm so thirsty I'll drink anything -or- I've had too much to drink.
The study sequence is more engaging than the PB&J. The lead up to the study shot would have more impact if the clock read 7:50. It follows the rule that you set up in the previous 2 clock shots.
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