I don't know if he's gasping because he can finally watch his movie that he bought from Wal-Mart and is doing a double take on the Twilight stand or the fact that you two above have Twihards for both Edward and Jacob.
Not surprised. Surprised. Not surprised. Surprised. Twilight. Surprised. Twilight. Clearly you are showing surprise but your story lacks clarity. Why shift back and forth between the reaction? What are you surprised about? You need visual variety, clarity and 3 more frames for completion.
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haha my fav twilight character is jacob.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Team Edward, all the way!!!
I don't know if he's gasping because he can finally watch his movie that he bought from Wal-Mart and is doing a double take on the Twilight stand or the fact that you two above have Twihards for both Edward and Jacob.
Not surprised. Surprised. Not surprised. Surprised. Twilight. Surprised. Twilight. Clearly you are showing surprise but your story lacks clarity. Why shift back and forth between the reaction? What are you surprised about? You need visual variety, clarity and 3 more frames for completion.
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