At first when I saw him at the table I thought he was motivated to do some homework and then saw that there weren't any books there. You're last picture of this set makes shows me alot of excitement in his motivation.
The first three shots of lethargy are good. The middle is confusing. He is standing in 3, 4, 5 but then sitting again in 7. Are you saying that he gets up but is confused and then sits back down? You would have a stronger series if you eliminated the middle shots, moved the last 3 frames to the middle and then ended with shots of what he was motivated to do.
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At first when I saw him at the table I thought he was motivated to do some homework and then saw that there weren't any books there. You're last picture of this set makes shows me alot of excitement in his motivation.
you too can be a super hero with a little motivation!! haha
The first three shots of lethargy are good. The middle is confusing. He is standing in 3, 4, 5 but then sitting again in 7. Are you saying that he gets up but is confused and then sits back down? You would have a stronger series if you eliminated the middle shots, moved the last 3 frames to the middle and then ended with shots of what he was motivated to do.
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