You tricked me by thinking you were going to be kind and return it. Of course the emotion is excitement therefore you would be excited to see alot of money and a credit card. MUUHHAHAHAHA!!!!
A dark take on excitement shot in an interesting way. A few frames are confusing though. After the first CU of the wallet, he runs to the wallet. There is a space discrepancy here. The CU of the man and wallet suggests that he is closer. You are trying to emphasize that he sees it and that's good. The bigger problem is that white car in the background. I know he is close to the wallet based on the recurring white car. So when the next frame shows him farther away running toward the wallet, you've created a jump cut because he moves back in time and space.
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Hey! That's mine! Good job
You tricked me by thinking you were going to be kind and return it. Of course the emotion is excitement therefore you would be excited to see alot of money and a credit card. MUUHHAHAHAHA!!!!
nice work..at first i thought you were avoiding something. i liked how you captured the action in your emotion
A dark take on excitement shot in an interesting way. A few frames are confusing though. After the first CU of the wallet, he runs to the wallet. There is a space discrepancy here. The CU of the man and wallet suggests that he is closer. You are trying to emphasize that he sees it and that's good. The bigger problem is that white car in the background. I know he is close to the wallet based on the recurring white car. So when the next frame shows him farther away running toward the wallet, you've created a jump cut because he moves back in time and space.
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