good job! Maybe you should've shown less images of you stressed and more images that could support what you were stressed out about. I liked it though!
All these images work to tell your story BUT the order in which you've put them in I might have done differently. I'm not 100% sure right now but I'm going to mull it over.
Great expressions. You need more variety in your content though. 7 out of 10 of your shots are the same. You can show other items that may be adding to the stress of your deadline like a clock and calendar. You can also vary the shots focused on you. Try and ECU of your furled brow, a long shots where your surrounded by books, etc...
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nice work showing anxiety
good job! Maybe you should've shown less images of you stressed and more images that could support what you were stressed out about. I liked it though!
haha great anxious expressions. lots of repeated shots
spot on!
All these images work to tell your story BUT the order in which you've put them in I might have done differently. I'm not 100% sure right now but I'm going to mull it over.
Great expressions. You need more variety in your content though. 7 out of 10 of your shots are the same. You can show other items that may be adding to the stress of your deadline like a clock and calendar. You can also vary the shots focused on you. Try and ECU of your furled brow, a long shots where your surrounded by books, etc...
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