It was hard for me to read the descriptions. This is an ambitious project. It will fall within the time guidelines because of all the jump cuts but keep in mind that it's a lot to shoot and that in turn means a lot to edit. Looks like a great project though. I like the reveal of the badge. If you need to shorten this you could make complete story out of seeing the gun at wake up and leave the audience questioning what it's for during breakfast to the reveal of the badge and end there. I like your motivation for the extended story though. Have fun and be safe!
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Nice story board! A lot of drawings!
It was hard for me to read the descriptions. This is an ambitious project. It will fall within the time guidelines because of all the jump cuts but keep in mind that it's a lot to shoot and that in turn means a lot to edit. Looks like a great project though. I like the reveal of the badge. If you need to shorten this you could make complete story out of seeing the gun at wake up and leave the audience questioning what it's for during breakfast to the reveal of the badge and end there. I like your motivation for the extended story though. Have fun and be safe!
This is very detailed, and hard to make out, but it looks interesting
cant wait to see your video guys. looks sweet.
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