Assignment #1
10 People:
My grandpa
Mike Myers
John Di Maggio
Jim Morrison
Jeff Bridges
Adam West
Richard Nixon
Bill Clinton
George Clooney
Rod Serling
10 Places:
A dark, musty basement
Volcano
Rainforest
Heavy city foot traffic
On a bike
Underground club
Insane asylum
Field in front of a hospital
Underground tunnel
Beach with a lightning storm impending
10 Things I feel passionate about
Paying it forward
Imagination
Creativity
Having fun
Laughing
Socializing
Eating
Order
Unity
Listing to music
4. Ext. SIDEWALK- DAY
Nixon
Let’s play a game Mr. Di Maggio.
John
Sure, I don’t see why not. What will it entail and is there a prize?
Nixon
The game will be to see who is more popular on these here streets. The prize with be that of being if I win, I have you follow me around saying whatever I want you to say in any voice I choose.
John
And if I win?
Nixon
If you win, I will let you see what it’s like to be a president.
John
Fair enough.
They shake hands
A large group of children walk by heading to school
John
(With his belly rumbling he says in his Jake the Dog character voice)
Hehe, Stomachs are weird
The group of children laugh
Nixon
Hey there little guy, would you like some candy?
Young boy gets scared and runs away crying
John
(In a different character, Bender, voice)
Nice one, creepazoid.
Nixon
GGgggrrrrrr………
An elderly couple walks up
Nixon
I am not a crook. Take a picture for a dollar
The couple stops to take a picture with him
John
Oh come on!
A group of young adults are nearing
John
(In Bender voice)
Ohhh yeaaa, come to papa.
1 comment:
You need to include a narrative description to set up the scene. You have a good beginning and middle but it doesn't feel like you ever get to the ending. Less scenarios with the bet and a clear winner following through with the prize would make it feel more complete.
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