10 people
Bill Nicks
Will Burmister
Vicki
Jessica Lynam
Bobbie Slone
Kyle Enfalt
Sarah
Joe
Pete Robision
John Jurek
10 locations
IUSB
Potawatomi park
Battell park
Notre Dame
Howard park
East race
Saint Mary’s
Pinhook park
Outside morris civic
Potato creek state park
10 topics
Cooking
Trains
Magic
History
Syfi
Photoshop
Bryce
Comics
Computers
Music
Script
(walking around Notre Dame Campus)
written By Trevor Chidister
written By Trevor Chidister
INT. Notre
Dame Campus-Day
Vicki and
Sarah are walking talking about things they like to cook or eat
VICKI: (walks
up and sees Sarah) Hi Sarah
SARAH: Hi Vicki
nice to see you again
(They both
start walking)
VICKI: so
what have you been up to lately?
SARAH: Not
much you?
VICKI: Same
(clock tower chimes and Vicki checks the time) it’s close to dinner time after
our walk we could get something to eat
SARAH: Sure
I think we could go to Subway if you want
VICKI: That
sounds good or we could go back to my place and I could fix use a nice home
cooked meal
SARAH: That’s
fine as long as it’s not too much trouble (Sarah thinks of a way she could pay
Vicki back for this) How about if I fix some dessert for use to have after
dinner
VICKI: No,
it’s not and dessert sounds great like what
SARAH: How
about apple pie
VICKI: (thinks
about it) sounds great
SARAH: What
are you thinking of fixing use for dinner
VICKI: How
about skillet spaghetti
SARAH: (Sarah
thinks yum) I love pasta it sounds great
VICKI: I
know that’s why I suggested you coming over for dinner plus it is easy to make,
I will even make some garlic bread
SARAH: Alright
let’s go over to your place and eat.
Vicki agrees
by shaking her head up and down and they finish by heading to their cars and
heading over to Vicki’s car and she drives them to her place.
15 comments:
We need more context. Who are Vicki and Sarah? Describe them in your narrative description.
I liked the photos and the dialogue you used in the video. It was well done.
good images, but i wasn't sure who the characters were.
Very clear and simple nice use of dialogue.
I love the late reply at the end there.
I liked the conversation between the two. And you took a lot of great pictures.
Not sure who these people were. Some close ups would have been nice.
good video. i liked how practical the story was and that the images and audio went well together.
Video: I thought the conversation went well and it was pretty cool that you took actualy photos (it looks like you did atleast). Short and simple, good job!
The pictures worked perfect with your script. Kept me interested.
i thought it was very interesting and it showed good compositions. That is a beautiful campus by the way
Good use of real actors. Not sure who they were though without reading the script
pretty cool use of powerpoint. i wanted some spaghetti.
like the depth of field of notre dame good script.
Nice job with the images matching up with the script
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